


Does the ‘Butterfly Effect’ brief have enough of a range?
- could propose other films
With the introduction in the key booklet now does that help the understanding of the work? (butterfly effect)
Originally each pictogram was going to be a different colour, does keeping them the two same colours work? (scuba diving)
Do the examples of pictograms work at the smaller scale? Are they clear in their meaning? (you can write on the print out)
What sort of impression do you get of ‘Equine Engineering’ by looking through the website proposal?
- High end, make body type smaller
- bit dry, look at DS emotion for different spin
Any major type errors that are staring you in the face with the website?
- body copy too big
Other comments:
- have different layout on the tshirts, information could be too detailed to print on clothing
- prints have worked well
"I’ve had a look at the few pages you’ve done so far and I like the layout. Under the planning and design section, the slideshow wants to be pictures/samples of the drawings and elevations which I’ll be putting on here for you and also a sample of the design and access statement. I’ve put this on dropbox now for Liam to design me a template. Did you want to chase him on business cards and letterheads as well. The material samples you’ve photographed want to come under the construction section where you’ve written we can source material for you. Other than that it all looks fine"

"Couple of things first on the column down the left I prefer the extended green bar right to the bottom. The titles should be Working Hunter and Manege not how you’ve spelt them.
On the other slides I prefer the writing to be as one, i.e not in columns. I like Slide 8 layout."
I’m not going to lie to you, Slide 17 is my favourite. I agree with your thinking of the menu popping out from the side. Please replace Costs with Prices though!
For the manege construction I really like the slide show idea and then below this I would like to give a description of works being undertaken. I’ll let you play around with it a bit more. I’m also going to want to remove the manege and leave it as just construction.
The jumps menu can be split into 3 – Showjumps, Working Hunter and Cross Country
Once you’ve sent through a few more ideas, we can look at populating the page with actual work and wording. If you are free one weekend, I would quite like you to do a sequencing of works where you photograph each stage of me constructing a jump.




I have photos of the manege in construction and will be getting more of it in final state.
Give me a shout if you need anything else.
Here are a few show jump websites
http://www.countryside-sj.co.
http://www.classicshowjumps.
http://www.qualityshowjumps.
and some manege construction
http://www.williams-and-
http://www.chapelstone.co.uk/
Section of email from me to John:
"As far as the logo goes, I initially liked the horse jumping over the name but was put off because this was a very popular style logo, if a different take on this could be done have a go.. I don’t want a logo based on an engineering design. If Liam can do some basic designs I can have a look at I will choose one then that a more detailed logo can be done on.
I want the business to look like a mid price business. The planning and construction side needs to be very professional and the jumps side needs to be personal based. I don’t want the website to appear like a commercial one. As I’ll be doing all the work myself the customer will only ever have one point of contact for whatever product they want. The jumps are all going to be made to order as well – so it needs to feel personal to the user. I don’t know how easy it is to do but the idea of having a jump builder on the site would be great. So the user can pick a jump style and then choose the colours and the size and to what standard."



