After talking to people in the crit it was apparent that the designs for screen weren't obvious as they needed to be. I'd already considered placing them into a screen to aid understanding and the feedback from that supported that idea. I have photographed one of the monitors at college, to avoid photographing mine which has a stand, this way it looks as though the interactive screens can be mounted straight on the wall.





I also included an image where someone is using the screen, this I think makes it clearer that it is a touch screen rather than just a monitor.